I could understand what he was saying.
The RED POWER TIE is appropriate, and he is wearing a very good suit. It is a perfect uniform for the year 2010
Now... As far as his speaking performance. I could help him a great deal.
I do not know much. But I understand public speaking.
One must understand that when communicating 60% of what you communicate is through ones body language. 20% of what one communicates is from the tonality and enunciation of the words that come out of ones mouth.... And only 20%
Only 20% of what is communicated to the public is the actual words that come out of ones mouth. The actual words account for ONLY 20% of the actual message.
He needs to look up more often, and not appear to be just reading.
I would suggest a little more passion, tonality, and enunciation in his speech.
Especially passion. Perhaps yelling loud, thrusting his right arm straight out with an open hand. Thrusting it out after every point he was making.
The audience should also be behind every statement he makes. This sells the idea. Get the audience involved.
""People Will Probably Never Remember What You Said, And May Never Remember What You Did. However, People Will Always Remember How You Made Them Feel."