Looks like you need to proof read it dude, there are multiple spelling/grammar errors and a few spots where it seems like you're just missing a word or two?
"earthquake" wrote:
What is with the "Dude" thing? I thought "DUDE" went out 10 years after "Fast Times At Ridgmont Hogh."
It is so easy to shit on someone, and most people do it for reqsons of self insecurity.
Earthquake, this is a forum not the New York Fucking Times.
I thought he did fine job.
R.P.
""People Will Probably Never Remember What You Said, And May Never Remember What You Did. However, People Will Always Remember How You Made Them Feel."